Your id card has been stolen. write a letter to the local police station, giving detail. Who you are. What happened? Ask what you should do to get a new id card.

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing

this

letter to file a complaint about the identification

card

of the

University

that has been stolen. I am a student at Oxford

University

, London, and studying for a bachelor of computers in 2nd year.

Moreover

, I live on the

university

campus and I need an

card

to enter the

University

Furthermore

last

weekend, I went to visit the museum with my friends which is not far away from my

University

campus. So, at that time, I used an

card

to go outside the

university

. Unfortunately, I lost my

card

in the museum because there was a lot of

crowd

Change to a plural noun

crowds

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However

, when I came to the

university

at that time realized that I lost my

card

. All in all,

firstly

, I called my deen to inform about the mishappening. After that, he told me, you should file a complaint with the police station regarding my

card

. When I visited the police station

then

I gave the whole information about my

cards

such

as the name Eva smith,

card

number BC12345, a subject which is mentioned on the

card

java,c++, and software engineering. I requested a duplicate

card

but it will talk about almost 2 weeks to receive it. I am looking forward to hearing positive news from you soon. Yours faithfully, Eva Smith.

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The Greeting

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Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

224 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your id card has been stolen. write a letter to the local police station, giving detail. Who you are. What happened? Ask what you should do to get a new id card.

The Greeting

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

An increasing number of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other prople think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?