The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.write at least 150 words.

The given below pie chart shows the cultural and leisure Activities amongst boys’ and girls’. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts illustrate, Youngsters, cultural and free
time
Activities. Here it clearly shows the boy's and
girls'
Change noun form
girl's
show examples
taste differences. Both
gender
Change to a plural noun
genders
show examples
shows the same interest in listening to music. Rest all activities are different.
According to
,gender it is varying.
Boys
mainly
using
Wrong verb form
use
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their leisure period for computer games. They are spending 34% on digital gadgets.
Girls
are spending most of their
time
dancing, Almost 27%. In the case of reading only few
time
is spent by
boys
compared to
girls
. 2% by
boys
and 2% by
girls
. Soccer is only
playing
Wrong verb form
played
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by
boys
17%
as well as
Gymnastic
Fix the agreement mistake
gymnastics
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only by
girls
11%. Both are showing
same
Correct article usage
the same
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interset
Correct your spelling
interest
show examples
in Hearing
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
Music.
Boys
and
Girls
showing 10%.
Boys
like to spend
their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
11%
time
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
skateboarding.
Instead
of that
girls
showing
Wrong verb form
showed
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15%
interset
Correct your spelling
interest
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in netball.
Atlast
Correct your spelling
Last
but not least 26%
interset
Correct your spelling
interest
show examples
Add a missing verb
is show
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show
Wrong verb form
shown
show examples
by
boys
in Basketball. We can clearly see that, Most of the physical activities
done
Add a missing verb
are done
show examples
by
Girls
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, girls, boys with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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