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1.You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter oGive details of your visit to the restaurant oExplain the reason for the celebration oSay what was good about the food and the services

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my satisfaction and admiration regarding the outstanding
food
 and service we
have
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enjoyed in your
restaurant
, “La-Italiano”,
last
 Sunday. Thank you for making our event more special. It was my friend's birthday, so we decided to celebrate it at your
restaurant
. We visited your
restaurant
 on 29th July, at around 7.30 pm,
due to
 its convenient location and a good reputation for delicious
food
. I am glad that we picked your place. Five of us went to your eatery and we enjoyed a traditional Italian cousin for dinner and a special black forest cake from your
restaurant
. It really did worth the money we paid because I suppose you have hired the best chef in the town! The service of the waiters was
also
 marvellous. They were truly well-mannered, organised and skilled in serving
food
. On top of that, the interior design of your place is adequately stunning. We
also
 realised how preciously you treat your customers when my friend got a chocolate box as a birthday gift on behalf of your
restaurant
. That truly made our day. I hope the authorities of your
restaurant
 will always ensure
this
 excellent service and
food
 to all its guests. Yours faithfully, Shadia Rahman
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