You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbour Mr.Jackson moved in who has loud parties several times a week. You have spoken to Mr.Jackson but are not very close friends Write a letter to Mr.Jackson. In your letter: •Explain the situation •Describe why it bothers you •Suggest a solution

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Jackson, I am writing to complain about the continuous noise coming from your apartment for the

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place next door and had dozens of overnight parties, I had not been able to properly rest. To be honest, I understand that these parties are often fun;

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, I think they should not be lengthy and loud. I have been quite frustrated these days as my boss has asked me to stay focused several times. Because I have a morning job starting at 6 am, proper sleep time is extremely important to me,

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, It would be hard for me to focus on my work in the midmorning. I would appreciate it if you could have a curfew time around 11 o'clock which is reasonable based on civil law. I

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, if I ever hear you making loud noises after 11 o'clock, I would immediately call the police upon you. Please be mindful and reach back to me as soon as possible Sincerely, Robert Lee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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183 words

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