In most cities and towns, the high volumes of road traffic have become a problem. What are the causes and what actions could be taken to solve the problem?

There is no denying that road
traffic
congestion
has become an essential
issue
in urban areas in recent decades. There are
few
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reasons for
this
issue
namely the increasing quantity of
cars
in the big cities and narrow
roads
. In
this
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i
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will explore what measures can be taken to relieve
traffic
and at least partly solve
this
issue
. First and foremost it is obvious that cramped
roads
are the reason
of
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traffic
congestion
. Most of the
roads
in the big cities have limited space for vehicles to move and as
result
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it leads to delays and tremendous
traffic
congestion
. Building wider
roads
can partly solve
this
problem because it allows
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us to
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to move
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traffic
more easily.
For instance
in my city of
Astana
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local authorities trying to build spacious
roads
. Of
course
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it is not
completely
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a completely
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solved
issue
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the issue
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of
traffic
congestion
but it is significantly helped to decrease
of
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traffic
jams.
Furthermore
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it is worth
to notice
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that almost every second inhabitant in the big city can afford a car and in recent years
amount
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of
cars
have
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expirienced
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experienced
upward
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trend. States should take measures to decrease
total
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cars
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number of cars
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on the
roads
.
For
example
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they should encourage
alternative
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type
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types
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of transport
such
as
becycle
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bicycle
bicycles
,
electric
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and electric
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scooters.
In
addition
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pupils should be carried by school buses it can
also
facilitate to reduce
amount
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the amount
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of
cars
on the
roads
. In conclusion, Undoubtedly there are growing concerns about
of
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traffics
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traffic
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on the
roads
,
roads
with limited spaces and
accesebility
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accessibility
of individuals to buy a car leads to issues like
traffic
jams. ,
However
government
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the government
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can take some measures and find the resolution
of
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to
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this
problem.
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