Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are plenty of
subjects
which
students
have to learn at school. Each subject has
different
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reason
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reasons
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why pupils should learn them. Some
people
thought
history
was one of the most important
subjects
but others emphasized that
Science
and
Technology
were more important than
history
.
History
taught
students
what they could do to improve themselves, their country, society, industries and so on. Stories of historical figures provided pupils
some
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ways to achieve their goals, it
also
showed them that they were supposed to avoid some
behavior
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otherwise
they could get themselves in
troubles
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.
History
always gave children
advices
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for
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what to do or what not to do.
Moreover
,
people
could learn about different cultures through learning
history
, it
also
gave
people
different angles to see the world.
Students
learnt how the world works from
Science
and
Technology
. Children could gain knowledge of our environment
via
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learning chemistry, physics, and biology.
People
could invent new products which provided
people
more convenient life through
those knowledge
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.
In addition
,
while
learning
Science
and
Technology
,
students
could train their logical thinking.
This
ability helped
people
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problems. I personally believe that all the
subjects
that we learn in
the
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school are important.
History
taught me who I am, what is my culture and how can I be a better person.
Science
and
Technology
gave me
ability
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the ability
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to solve problems
from
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in
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my daily life. I cannot live my life without one of those
subjects
. It is
an
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essential knowledge that pupils should gain
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history
and
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Science
and
Technology
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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