Today more and more tourist are visiting places were conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert or Antarctica. What are advantages and disadvantages of it

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In the current world,
people
's preference change, and
this
circumstance
related
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with
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to
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technological developments. Today,
people
want to go
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to extreme
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pleaces
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places
such
deserts
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as deserts
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, glaciers etc rather than popular touristic
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places
.
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essay will discuss both
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of going
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places
which is difficult. One of the major
benefit
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benefits
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of visiting
such
a
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a place
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places
is
contribution
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to
counries
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countries
country's
economy
becasue
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because
these
places
which be in under develop
countries
so
turist
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tourist
tourists
came to see
this
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pleces
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place
places
and they spent money.
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came indirectly.
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, one of the biggest desert
be
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in Africa and
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countries
'
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economies
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are not good but after changing
of
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people
's attitudes,
such
countries
have
change
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chance
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to
develop
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.
On the other hand
, in the
places
that
turist
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tourists
tourist
go there mostly,
life
is more expensive than
local
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places
.
Therefore
, local
people
's
life
become
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very hard especially in under
develop
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developing
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societies.
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,
turists
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tourists
go to Egypt for seeing
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the pyramids
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and they
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a gift
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gift
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from local
people
with
foreing
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foreign
money or local money. In
this
way, all
shoping
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shopping
hoping
things become international and
this
people
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life
get expensive.
Additionally
, as I mentioned above, generally difficult
pleaces
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places
please
be in poor
countries
so if
truist
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trust
activity
change
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changes
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to go
a
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such places
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such
places
, governments want to develop conditions which are staying,
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food
,transportation etc. for specific
places
. Governments forget to take care of their communities so
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this
situation
have
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important drawbacks.
To sum up
,
everythink
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everything
that has been stated so far,
turist
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tourists
prefer
places
that are conditions difficult, and
this
situation
have
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both cons and pons. On the one hand, it contributed to
country's
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the country's
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economy.
On the other hand
, governments leave out the
comunties '
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companies'
needs and
life
become
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becomes
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expensive in these
pleaces
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places
.
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