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people
want to go extreme
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to extreme
pleaces
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places
such
deserts
, glaciers etc rather than popular touristic Change preposition
as deserts
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places
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benefits
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a contribution
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countries
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because
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which be in under develop countries
so turist
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tourist
tourists
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these
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place
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economies
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people
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chance
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development
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tourists
tourist
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in local
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.Therefore
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become
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develop
societies. Change the verb form
developing
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, turists
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tourists
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the pyramids
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a gift
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gifts
people
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foreign
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people's
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get expensive. Additionally
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countries
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such places
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such
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, governments want to develop conditions which are staying,fooding
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food
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this
situation have
important drawbacks.
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, everythink
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everything
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tourists
places
that are conditions difficult, and this
situation have
both cons and pons. On the one hand, it contributed to Change the verb form
has
country's
economy.Correct article usage
the country's
On the other hand
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companies'
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becomes
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