University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? Nowadays, many students pursue their higher studies in foreign countries. The main advantage for students studying abroad is the access to better quality education and improved job prospects.

These days ,
students
are more likely to study abroad as a part of their studies ,
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of the benefits of
this
,they are facing
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of
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back draws
.In
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advantages
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the advantages
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and disadvantages of studying in foreign countries .
Firstly
, they are
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plenty of overseas
students
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over the world and that
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many advantages
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them knowledge and skills because foreign institutions may offer better courses .
In addition
, living abroad can expand
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horizons
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example, they become more independent , and
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are exposed to different cultures and
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customs
costumes
.
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Furthermore
, qualifications gained abroad can open the door to better job opportunities .
As a result
, they will become more
responsable
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responsible
for cooking , cleaning and paying bills.
Secondly
, studying and living abroad can be difficult and it has a lot of challenges
such
as language barrier,
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applications .Sadly, living alone in an unfamiliar culture can cause homesickness.
Consequently
, they are not all capable to support
this
tough life so some of them prefer
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return to
country
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of origin . In conclusion , studying
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foreign
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the foreign
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country is a good prospect for
students
in order to contribute positively
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the
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society with many values
such
as tolerance and patience .
Therefore
we can not avoid bad
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consequences
and just accept them.

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