Some people believe that the activity of large multinational corporations mostly benefits the economy of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Although
, that some people think that most developing countries are being benefited by
multinational Change preposition
from
corporations
, others are taking the opposite side
and believe that big multinational corporations
are putting in
danger Correct quantifier usage
others in
economy
's country
. In my opinion, I consider that big corporations
are harmful to the economy
of developing countries and also
believe that local economies are affected.
On one hand, there are many people who think that big companies aim against the economy
of developing countries and I agree. In other words
, big corporations
have only one goal which is to make as much money as they can destroy
all the competition around because they have more economic resources to do it. Fix the infinitive
to destroy
For example
, big chains of supermarkets can drop prices
of some products losing a minimum amount of money but attracting more customers that will expend more later on. Correct article usage
the prices
While
small businesses such
as a local market cannot do that because of the tiny volume of sales. As consequence, the local economy
is affected.
On the other hand
, the other side
believe
that it is beneficial for the Change the verb form
believes
country
's economy
because big companies pay a huge amount of tax which later on what
will be reflected in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
country
as a public infrastructure such
are schools, hospitals and the improvement of the roads. Furthermore
, it is a big source of employment where the entire population is benefited
from being part of the workforce. A clear example that happened in my city with the arrival of Billagong's factories where hundreds of unemployed people found a job. Replace the word
benefits
Consequently
, it is helping the local economy
move forward.
To conclude
, there is a side
of the population who believe that big corporations
strengthen the country
's economy
by paying taxes and employing their habitants
. Correct your spelling
habitats
While
the other side
believe
the opposite where big Change the verb form
believes
corporations
are destroying the economy
bringing more competitive prices and affecting small businesses.Submitted by gonzalofuentesvg on
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