Some people believe that the activity of large multinational corporations mostly benefits the economy of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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, that some people think that most developing countries are being benefited

by

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from

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multinational

corporations

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, others are taking the opposite

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and believe that big multinational

corporations

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are putting

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others in

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danger

economy

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's

country

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. In my opinion, I consider that big

corporations

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are harmful to the

economy

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of developing countries and

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believe that local economies are affected. On one hand, there are many people who think that big companies aim against the

economy

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of developing countries and I agree.

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, big

corporations

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have only one goal which is to make as much money as they can

destroy

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all the competition around because they have more economic resources to do it.

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, big chains of supermarkets can drop

prices

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the prices

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of some products losing a minimum amount of money but attracting more customers that will expend more later on.

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small businesses

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as a local market cannot do that because of the tiny volume of sales. As consequence, the local

economy

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is affected.

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, the other

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believe

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that it is beneficial for the

country

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's

economy

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because big companies pay a huge amount of tax which later on

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apply

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will be reflected in the

country

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as a public infrastructure

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are schools, hospitals and the improvement of the roads.

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, it is a big source of employment where the entire population is

benefited

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benefits

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from being part of the workforce. A clear example that happened in my city with the arrival of Billagong's factories where hundreds of unemployed people found a job.

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, it is helping the local

economy

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move forward.

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, there is a

side

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of the population who believe that big

corporations

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strengthen the

country

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's

economy

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by paying taxes and employing their

habitants

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habitats

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.

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the other

side

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believe

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the opposite where big

corporations

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are destroying the

economy

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bringing more competitive prices and affecting small businesses.