The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
in the USA in fast food
restaurants in 2003, 2006, and 2013.
Overall
, although
the number of people
having their food
at fast food
restaurants once per week was significant in 2003 and 2006, it was replaced by a group representing people
who ate there either one or two times a month in 2013. Furthermore
, the lowest percentage was reached by people
eating there on a daily basis.
Around 5% of people
ate fast food
everyday
in 2003. Replace the word
every day
However
, it dropped a year after, fluctuations are there in the category of people
who ate several times a week. It can be seen that there was a decrease in the number of people
who ate once in
a week from about 33% in 2006 to around 27% in 2013. Change preposition
apply
While
during the same time period
there was a surge in the category of Add a comma
,period
people
who ate once or twice a month. However
, the proportion was fairly constant in 2003 for these categories.
Looking at the lower percentage groups, people
who eat rarely in a year was about 13% in 2003, which increased to 15% in 2006 and remained the same in 2013. People
who have never been to fast food
restaurants fall below 5% in the overall
given time period.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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