The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiyon, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given two maps illustrate the present Norbiton industrial zone and the proposal for its upcoming development.

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, at first glance, it can be seen that in the new planning, all the factories are going to be removed and new infrastructures ( housing, shops, medical centre, school, and a playground) will be added to the town.

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, two new roads and a smaller circular road will be constructed.

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with, the first map constitutes eight factories close to the roads. In the middle of the town, there is a track, which is circled shaped, extending towards the south and the east. There are three factories around the ring-shaped roadway and five industries surrounding the pavement to the east. There is a river toward the north as well, beside which farmland is located.

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, in the new proposal for the city, there will be no industries, which are going to be replaced with other structures

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as housing, shopping malls, a healthcare centre, a playing ground for the children, and a school. One more striking change is that the circular expressway will be

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developed to the north

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crossing the river through a bridge.

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this

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, there will be another tiny circular road, which will be located in the south.

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, one more pavement will be created, closer to the west of the city.

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