The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph is imagine
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is imagined
from
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of
frequency
of eating at fast Add an article
the frequency
a frequency
food
restaurants among people
in the USA
from years
2003 until years
2013. In there
looks that average of Change preposition
There
people
in the USA
in years
2003 that
is have
31% of most Change the verb form
has
people
just once a week frequency
of eating at fast food
restaurant. Which
Correct pronoun usage
That
that
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apply
conditions
is Fix the agreement mistake
condition
same
Correct article usage
the same
with
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as
average
of most Add an article
an average
people
in the USA
in years
2006, that
is have
33% of most Change the verb form
has
people
just once a week frequency
of eating at fast food
restaurant. But, that conditions
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condition
is
different Change the verb form
are
with
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from
average
of Add an article
an average
people
in the USA
in years
2013, that
is have
33% Change the verb form
has
most
of Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
just once or twice a month Add an article
the people
frequency
of eating at fast food
restaurant. In thorough graph can concluded
Change the verb form
conclude
be concluded
that
average of Correct determiner usage
the
people
in the USA
in years
2003 until 2013 eating at fast Correct article usage
the years
food
restaurants for
once a week and once or twice a monthChange preposition
apply
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