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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents

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children
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 depends
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 on the surroundings in which they are raised, we are a summary of our outside world. It is argued that
children
 who are raised in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with problems of adulthood
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 than
children
 raised by wealthy families. I believe that in
life
, the matter is given by facing difficult circumstances at an early age, that are forcing the infant to develop faster than it usually happens.
Firstly
, there is no doubt that
children
 who were raised in poorer families are more likely to face difficulties early in their childhood and teenage.
For instance
, having fewer possibilities determines the need to step
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 adult shoes faster, by contributing
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 financial work, maybe even getting a job that automatically will influence the perspective of real
life
. It brings awareness to the growth process and
this
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Secondly
, I believe that experience makes the difference, not the financial status in which you were raised. But in the case of not having many possibilities, the need for creating them for yourself is naturally born, because you are conscious that nobody is giving them for free so you begin to create your own.
This
 way, you can develop useful skills that will suit adult
life
 problems. Some of the wealthy
children
 do not have a landmark related to working for what
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 want. Some of them do not know how much implication and devotion
life
 needs. If
life
 was presented as black and white
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 adulthood will surprise and scare many teenagers
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 because they are entering a whole different, full of
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 timeline. In conclusion, I believe that
children
 raised with fewer possibilities are better at dealing
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 solving adult problems , rather than the ones raised by wealthy parents.
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