The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The
pie
charts illustrate the typical meal in the USA with percentages of three types of nutrients including sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar whose consumption in large quantities may be harmful to health.
Overall
, the charts reveal that the most significant sector in the two charts is related to
dinner
and the amount of added sugar in
snacks
is by far more than other additives.
While
breakfast
is the lowest typical meal nutrients are compared with others. Based on the first
pie
chart, the
dinner
sector compromised an average of 43%, which is the highest rate of all.
Snacks
and
breakfast
represented the same amount of sodium consumption 14%,
while
lunch showed an average number is 29%. In the second
pie
chart,
dinner
again leads but with the added saturated fat with an indicator of 37%.
This
time
snacks
and
breakfast
have different rates 21% and 16%, respectively
while
breakfast
is again the lowest meal for the addition of saturated fat.
Lastly
, in the third
pie
chart,
snacks
overtook
dinner
by adding sugar to food with 42%
while
dinner
was made up 23%.
Dinner
and
breakfast
have almost the same percentage difference of 3% in favour of
dinner
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, dinner, snacks, breakfast with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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