The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates electricity in terms of how much was produced and consumed in ten countries in 2014.
Overall
, it is clear that
China was by far the highest consumption
and production of electricity. It is also
noticeable that the figures for consumption
and production by any particular country tend to be fairly similar.
Looking into it further
, China accounted for the largest position in terms of consumption
and production at 5322 billion
kWh
and 5398 billion
kWh
respectively. It was followed by the United States, which just used 3866 billion
kWh
and outputted 4099 billion
kWh
.
Only three other countries-Russia, Japan and India -have produced and consumed the volume of electricity almost more than 600 billion
kWh
. However
, the figures for consumption
in Canada dropped to 499.9 billion
kWh
, but its consumption
remained at 618.9 billion
kWh
. With exception of these, the figures for Korea, Rep was the smallest position at 485,1 billion
kWh
and 449.5 kWh
respectively, compared with France(561.2 462.9), Brazil(530.7, 455.8) and Germany（526.6 582.5) in 2014.Submitted by zhoupengbd on
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