The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates electricity in terms of how much was produced and consumed in ten countries in 2014.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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China was by far the highest
consumption
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and production of electricity. It is
also
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noticeable that the figures for
consumption
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and production by any particular country tend to be fairly similar. Looking into it
further
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, China accounted for the largest position in terms of
consumption
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and production at 5322
billion
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kWh
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and 5398
billion
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kWh
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respectively. It was followed by the United States, which just used 3866
billion
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kWh
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and outputted 4099
billion
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kWh
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. Only three other countries-Russia, Japan and India -have produced and consumed the volume of electricity almost more than 600
billion
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kWh
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.
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, the figures for
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in Canada dropped to 499.9
billion
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kWh
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, but its
consumption
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remained at 618.9
billion
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kWh
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. With exception of these, the figures for Korea, Rep was the smallest position at 485,1
billion
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kWh
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and 449.5
kWh
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respectively, compared with France(561.2 462.9), Brazil(530.7, 455.8) and Germany(526.6 582.5) in 2014.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hour (MWh)
  • capacity
  • output
  • distribution
  • consumption
  • production
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • trend
  • pattern
  • discrepancy
  • regional
  • anomaly
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