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You have been working in a company for three years, but now wish to leaving job. Write a letter to the manager of the company.

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Dear sir Jobs, I am writing to require about
the
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leaving the
company
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. I have been working in a
company
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 for three years and have learned a lot of lessons about how to work in the
company
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.
For instance
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 how to communicate with customers and what should be
good
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 office worker. Basically, you always were
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 for me. It was the best time for me except
my
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 school period. I will look forward to the atmosphere in our team, you were the superior colleagues and I will miss all of you. Please forgive me for my solution I would appreciate it if you could look into the matter as soon as possible. I could stay here, the problem is not you, the reason
of
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 my leaving is that
company
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suggest
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 me
bigger
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 salary than your
company
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. Yours sincerely, Hagrid James
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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