A freiend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. th your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Richa, Hope you are doing well .

This

is

such

a great piece of news that you are going

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camping for one week

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Munnar hill station , Shimla at the beginning of the next month. As you know ,

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had already

spend

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my vacations at

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same camping location

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yesteryear.

Therefore

, as per my experience over there, you would be able to enjoy not only scenic beauty there

,

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but

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the atmosphere filled with serenity and

tranquility

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.

Moreover

, you were asking about that stargazing trip , I would recommend you

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hire a local guide for that because he would take you to

proper

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location to observe the glazing and twinkling stars.

However

,

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also

want to discuss

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few worse things that could happen there.

Firstly

, you should have your umbrella and raincoat with you because

weather

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there is

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unperdictable

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unpredictable

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Secondly

,

unfortunately

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if there would be

pouring

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on that day ,it could spoil your plans to go outside .

Last

but not least , do not forget to carry insect repellent with you when you would be at the top of

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station . I am feeling very bad that

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am not accompanying you because of my exams

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that week but

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promise for

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vacations

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we will plan it together to go there. Hope you will enjoy your trip and

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will wait for your next letter to hear from you about your experience over there.

Yours

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friend, Deva