The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The given bar chart illustrates the international
selling
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in billions of dollars of four different
games
during a period of 7 years, between 2000 and 2006.
Overall
, we can see that three out of four
games
saw an increase over the period selected.
Furthermore
, handheld
games
were the most sold compared to the others. It is
also
evident that mobile phones and online
games
were developed later – they did not exist before 2001. In 2000, there were only two
games
available: handheld and console
games
. The former was the most played game of the year with nearly 12
billion
sales, which was twice more than console
games
. In the following years,
while
handheld
games
continued to rise gradually arriving at almost 18
billion
, console
games
started to decline, reaching
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around 4
billion
at the end
of the period. In 2001 and 2002, online
games
and mobile phone
games
were introduced, even though they stood only at just 2 and 3
billion
respectively. Over the next four years, both
games
rose gradually arriving at just over 6 and 9
billion
in 2006.
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