The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
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The given bar chart illustrates the international
selling
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in billions of dollars of four different
games
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during a period of 7 years, between 2000 and 2006.
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, we can see that three out of four
games
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saw an increase over the period selected.
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, handheld
games
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were the most sold compared to the others. It is
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evident that mobile phones and online
games
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were developed later – they did not exist before 2001. In 2000, there were only two
games
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available: handheld and console
games
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. The former was the most played game of the year with nearly 12
billion
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sales, which was twice more than console
games
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. In the following years,
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handheld
games
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continued to rise gradually arriving at almost 18
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, console
games
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started to decline, reaching
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to
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around 4
billion
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at the end
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of the period. In 2001 and 2002, online
games
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and mobile phone
games
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were introduced, even though they stood only at just 2 and 3
billion
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respectively. Over the next four years, both
games
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rose gradually arriving at just over 6 and 9
billion
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in 2006.
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