The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the Australia.
energy
consumed by an average householdChange preposition
in
Secondly
, It shows the percentage of emission of greenhouse gas according to
energy
consumption.
Overall
, Most of the people residing in Australia consumed energy
for heating. Similarly
, only 2% was used by the citizens for cooling purposes.
With regards to household energy
use, the amount of heating was widely used by the people which is 47%. Followed by, water heating at 30%. Moving further
, the proportion of other appliances is 25%. Refrigerator and lighting comprised 7% and 8% respectively. However
, energy
consumed for cooling is considered the least percentage.
On the other hand
, most of the emissions are made by using water appliances which is
32%. Followed by, other appliances and heating contributing 28% and 25 %respectively. The emission of gas from the refrigerator is 14%. Change the verb form
are
However
, lighting was at 8%. At last
, least proportion was contributed by cooling which is only 3%Submitted by santosh2001kk on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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