The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the number of mobile phone owners that used different mobile device features from 2006 to 2010.
Overall
, making calls was the most feature utilized throughout the period,
in contrast
, recording videos was the lowest among others. Starting in the year 2006, making calls achieved the highest percentage rate of 100% use among other applications.
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remains for a two-year period before it went down to 99% in 2010.
However
, even though recording videos and searching the internet had no recorded data in 2006, their numbers rose to 35% and 73%
at the end
of the period respectively. Utilization of taking photos gain a 5% increase every two years,
on the other hand
, sending and receiving messages never had more than 5% growth in over 4 years. Playing games number rose sharply from 17% in 2006 to 42% in 2008, before it made a slight decline to 1% by the end of 2010.
Lastly
, playing music had a moderate elevation of 6% from 2006-2008 and continue to rise to 26% in 2010. .
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