The graph below shows the contribution to different sectors of Indian economy in 1950,1970 and 1990
This
bar chart illustrates the contribution of various factors to the Indian economy between 1950,1970 and 1990. It is clear from the graph that, in 1950 and 1990 the sectors has been fluctuated except in 1970. According to
what is shown firstly
, in 1950 starting with industries which were 20 proportion and slightly increased in 1970. While
it fell from 27 per cent to just under 20 per cent.
Secondly
, self-employment climbed dramatically from approximately 7 % to 36 % which was the highest percentage in addition
to being the most contribution to the economy .
Finally
, the service sector and agriculture had nearly the same ratio in the three years with 26 % being the highest proportion in the service sector and moreover
, agriculture hit a peak of 35%.
In conclusion
we can say that all the features assisted the economy in several ways ,Add a comma
,conclusion
however
, self-employment has been the most helpful.Submitted by smmoe289 on
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