In recent years, people have become that they have not allocated
time
to their parents. Use synonyms
This
case can be related Linking Words
with
technological development, expanded work spans and generation gaps between family Change preposition
to
members
. Use synonyms
This
situation affects individuals negatively because they forget the concept of family and solidarity.
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Firstly
, the possible Linking Words
causes
of Use synonyms
this
situation are improved technologies, long Linking Words
time
work shifts and significant differences between generations. New technologies Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
smart phones
, computer software and movie applications have led to separation in homes. It was weird that as a technological device, television could attract Correct your spelling
smartphones
members
and it allowed them to make conversation which is essential for sustaining family ties. Use synonyms
In these
days, every member of Change preposition
These
family
has preferred to watch movies and play games Add an article
the family
instead
of Linking Words
only
a Add a missing verb
having only
half hour
conversation. Extended work shifts have an important role in terms of decreasing family ties. Family Add a hyphen
half-hour
members
especially parents cannot allocate Use synonyms
time
for their Use synonyms
children
in comparison to the past and those Use synonyms
children
who Use synonyms
exposed
Add a missing verb
are exposed
from
parents’ interests would become more individual. Change preposition
to
Finally
, Linking Words
generation
gap has been a common problem since the beginning of humanity, Add an article
the generation
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however
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,however
last
decades generation spans have Linking Words
shortened
by Add a missing verb
been shortened
the
technology. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
communication between Linking Words
members
has become more and more difficult. Use synonyms
As a result
, these three Linking Words
causes
have created Use synonyms
Add an article
the problem
a problem
problem
in spending Fix the agreement mistake
problems
time
with family.
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Secondly
, these Linking Words
causes
harm Use synonyms
families’
and Change preposition
to families’
members
’ relationships. Especially, Use synonyms
this
situation is more detrimental for Linking Words
children
because if they lose their emotions about their family, their behaviour and future would change negatively without family memories. Use synonyms
Besides
, parents may suffer from their emotions and loneliness in their late ages Linking Words
due to
weak ties between Linking Words
children
. In Use synonyms
long
Correct article usage
the long
terms
, each member may experience mental disorders in the future because depriving and exposing Fix the agreement mistake
term
of
many emotions can create depressive manner after many years. In short, harms would magnify Change preposition
apply
according to
deprivation and identity in Linking Words
long
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the long
terms
.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
term
causes
and effects can be multiplied Use synonyms
about
Change preposition
in
this
case. In my opinion, to prevent these bad impacts Linking Words
due to
separation in families, Linking Words
members
should Use synonyms
open
to Add a missing verb
be open
understand
them and allocate certain times for conversation.Wrong verb form
understanding