Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink that has scientifically been proved to have bad effects on people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some that businesses should not be

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permitted

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or drink which has been testified by scientists to exert a negative impact on people's

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health

.In my opinion, I disagree with

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statement. Admittedly, the prohibition of putting unhealthy

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items on shelves can elevate

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public health to higher levels.

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will result in the reallocation of resources, meaning that more funds will be poured into producing

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foods.

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will result in the redistribution of resources from the production of unhealthy goods to the manufacturing of healthy ones,

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making citizens healthier.

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, if we can control the intake of some types of these products, we can actually benefit from the consumption.

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,

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contains caffeine, which is harmful to our health.

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, a healthy dose of

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especially after

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time

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to work enables us to get fully refreshed and reinvigorated, thereby regaining enthusiasm for work. On top of the argument mentioned above, preventing

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from entering the market is likely to cause negative economic consequences.

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has been gaining popularity worldwide over the past few decades and has become an indispensable component of GDP in many countries.

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, the banning of it may lead to structural unemployment

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a reduction in tax revenues, which could have been allocated to other essential fields,

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stimulating economic growth.

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, denying

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access

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some kinds of unhealthy

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to the market may give rise to severe social problems. Specifically, junk foods,

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as

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, are usually served in big

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but are charged a

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low price, which is beneficial to low-income groups, who have

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difficulty

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in making ends meet.Once the underprivileged are deprived of the right to consume these goods , they are likely to shoulder a bigger financial burden. In the worst case,

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can lead to

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social

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robbery or

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theft

. When all is said and done, ban all types of unhealthy

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as the drawbacks far outstrip the benefits of the

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prohibition

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