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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given demonstrates the ratio of families in owned and rented
accommodation
 in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. All in all, the
households
 in retained
accommodation
 gradually went up ,
while
households
 in owned
accommodation
 showed a downward trend. From the figure，we can see clearly that percentage of
households
in
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owned had a large gap to rented
accommodation
 in 1918 and it was almost 4 times as big as it in rented
accommodation
, at 78% and 22% respectively.In 2001, the ratio of
households
in
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owned had reached a peak at approximately 70%.
By contrast
，the number of families renting
the
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houses has halved for it in 1918 by only
at
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31%. It is noticeable that the
households
 in retained
accommodation
 showed a modestly upward trend from 21% to 64% between 19198 and 2011.
On the contrary
, the ratio of families who rented
the
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accommodation
 in England and Wales went down moderately from 78% to 36%.
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