Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart
reperesents
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represents
the percentage of male female and
children
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consumption
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of fruits and
vegetable
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in three different
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in
UK
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.
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, it can be seen in the bar chat that women
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the
consumption
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of
the
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fruits and
vegitable
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vegetable
vegetables
.
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,
male
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and children have taken more
eatries
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entries
eateries
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. The 2
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percent
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decrease can be seen in men and youngsters in the final
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. In the
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2002
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the
womens
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women
were taking 25
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percent
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of the food which
then
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increses
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increases
to 8
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in
4
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year
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span. In the
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2010
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7% reduction in the
consumption
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food
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can be seen.
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male and young people were taking 22 and 11
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percent
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respectively of the
eatries
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eateries
entries
. In the four
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time
period
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it increases to 26 and 18
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percent
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respectively. In the
last
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four
years
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slight change in the
consumption
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of fruits and
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vegetables
vegitables
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vegetables
is observed
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