: Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Consumerism is a prevalent
issue
in
today
's
culture
. Many
people
spend
money
they don'
t
have, to buy
things
they don'
t
need.
People
spend
money
on
things
they can'
t
afford for a variety of reasons.
Firstly
, materialism is a common
issue
in
today
's
culture
,
due to
people
attaching their self-worth based on what they own.
For example
, a person who recently began working and earning
money
could go out and purchase the most expensive car
People
spend
money
on
things
they can'
t
afford for a variety of reasons.
Firstly
, materialism is a common
issue
in
today
's
culture
,
due to
people
attaching their self-worth based on what they own.
For example
, a person who recently began working and earning
money
could go out and purchase the most expensive car
People
spend
money
on
things
they can'
t
afford for a variety of reasons.
Firstly
, materialism is a common
issue
in
today
's
culture
,
due to
people
attaching their self-worth based on what they own.
For example
, a person who recently began working and earning
money
could go out and purchase the most expensive car
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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