In many cities the use of video camera (CCTV) at public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that measures restrict individual’s freedom. Do the benefits of these CCTV cameras outweigh the drawbacks?

some developing countries have increased

in

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their population

especially

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in the

numbers

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number

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of

youngs

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,which are higher than the

numbers

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number

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of

olders

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older

holders

. In

this

essay, I will explain why

this

situation has its advantages and they can outweigh the disadvantage.

To Begin

, increasing

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the young population has its pros ,and they are,

firstly

,young men are capable of

riseing

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raising

the economy of the country because they have the energy and health that they need to do the hard

works

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work

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,

while

the old people do not have it .

Secondly

, they are in begin of their lives so they are highly motivated to make

themeselves

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themselves

,and make some

seccess

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secret

stories .

For example

, they want to be leaders in their

cosities

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cities

societies

as these

empetions

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emotions

can change many

people

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lives for

better

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.

However

,

this

has some cons since young men do not have enough experience to make their

gooles

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goals

,which I mentioned in

upper

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graph, and

this

knowledge can be provided

from

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older leaders ,but

nawadays

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nowadays

internet has provided easy access to

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important information that they need .

Additionally

,

youngmen

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may not obtain the

neseccary

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necessary

tools that they need to

succed

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succeed

,

whereas

old people have the money and relationships required

although

this

also

can

be outweigh

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by hard work and some

confident

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.

To conclude

, countries which have the highest economies are made

from

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youngmen in their majority because they are more capable of

makeing

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making

changes since they are

healther

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healthier

healthy

and motivated

althogh

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although

it is true that countries have

younger

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a younger

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citizen

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citizens

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in most of their population have its disadvantages ,but these cons can outweigh easily by hard work and using the new technology to achieve their dreams.