The graphs show percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table above presents the proportion of various ways mobile phone users use their phones.
Overall
, searching the internet significantly rises over the course of 6 years. Meanwhile, playing game
fluctuates and other features appear to be steady.
With regards to searching the internet, there was no date recorded in 2006, Fix the agreement mistake
games
however
, it rises to 41% in 2008 and continued to rise noticeably to 73% in 2010. In addition
, recording video also
had no data recorded in 2006 and slowly increased to 9% in 2008 and rose by nearly 4 times in 2010, 35%.
On the other hand
, playing games fluctuated. It was recorded that 17% of users use their phones to play games and
significantly increased in 2008 to close to 3 times, 42%. Correct word choice
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However
, in 2010, it started tapering off to 41%.Submitted by crystalphan77 on
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