you recently received a letter fron you bank that should have contained a new credit card. Unfortunately, the card was not in the letter. Write a letter to your bank manager. I your letter, Explain what has happened suggest the credit card should be cancelled for security reasons ask when a new credit card can be sent to you.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I requested the platinum
credit
card
last
week linked to my account. Unfortunately, upon receiving it, I found out that the
credit
card
is missing from the envelope and the courier has been tampered with.
Additionally
, The document which contains the password is
also
missing.
Therefore
, I request you cancel
this
credit
card
as soon as possible
due to
security reasons. The
credit
may be used by someone who is actually not authorised to use it.
Moreover
, It may be used for some illegal activities.
Additionally
, It would be more helpful if you can let me know when a new
credit
card
can be sent to me. It has to be before 15th March as I will be out of the country where I will need it most.
In addition
to that, It should be free as I already paid for
this
one. I am looking for your prompt response on
this
. Yours faithfully, Kishan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • therefore
  • however
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  • despite

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