Production of goods has led to environmental damage. give causes and solution of th eproblem.

In
this
present world, humanity is facing a major concern of environmental damage
due to
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activities
by increasing the amount of production .In
this
essay , I will give brief causes and solutions
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phenomenon . On one hand ,
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will explain the impact of
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production on the environment .
Firstly
, the increasing world population is putting pressure on natural resources
such
as deforestation to exploit wood in the manufacture of wooden furniture ,
as a result
, we have cut down
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enormous
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rainforest.
Moreover
, fossil fuels like oil and gas are running out and we are destroying wildlife habitats
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which
lead
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to the extinction of many species of animals and plants .Sadly,
this
problem is a result of our consumption culture.
On the other hand
,
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companies and individuals are willing
this
issue by providing solutions , in order to decrease the impact of damage on the earth .As solutions , governments should introduce
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a law
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law
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to reduce emissions from factories ,
for instance
, they could impose
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green taxes
on companies and promote recycling .
Furthermore
, we should use
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the product
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product
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products
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with less packaging and recycle products as much as possible because
recyling
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recycling
save energy and raw materials
also
,
natural
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area
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should be protected . In conclusion , regardless of the huge increase
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factories and production , it is firmly to preserve our environment ,
thus
, the government should be strict , about waste produced by the companies .

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