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Many businesses choose to recruit from within their own country rather than sourcing staff from overseas. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Instead
 of hiring
foreigners
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 many companies decide to hire natives from their own
country
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countries
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.
This
 essay aims to discuss that
although
 there are downsides there are more benefits than drawbacks and the advantages are stronger. First of all, recruiting natives compared to foreigners has more benefits for the firm itself
while
 they simply adapt to the
firms
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firm's
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 atmosphere and form a connection with clients sooner than one employee from another country can. They are
also
 familiar with the culture, the people forming that society and the
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country
country's
countrys
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country
 background in general all of which lead to forming a very superior relationship with the clients and
also
 with each other as colleagues
On the other hand
, having internationals work for you enhances the chance of globalization
whereas
 having employees from different parts of the world has a considerable impact on people from those respective countries and will result in the firm getting more popular and getting demands for service
worlwide
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worldwide
 which eventually will bring fortune,
however
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this
 situation has risks and may not only not bring fortune but
also
 cause bankruptcy or
such
 which is why having natives work for you is a better choice for employers.
To conclude
, even though there are good and bad on both sides, the situation
that is
 more advantageous for everyone is recruiting from within the country and not outside.
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