Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

In today’s highly digital society, many children have been increasingly spending an important amount of their

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, specifically

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playing

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has impacted seriously their lifestyle in terms of loss of productivity and ability

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socialisation. It seems to be clear that measures need to be taken in order to mitigate the detrimental influences that can have on

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. It is undeniable that the skyrocketing hours spent on

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are owing to several harmful effects. It is evident that children are more commonly wasting their precious

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in activities that are not assisting them in the thriving process,

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as using crucial technologies on unnecessary

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reliance on computers for mere scope not only does not benefit them,

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wasting resourceful tools for ignoble reasons

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affects their mental and physical health. Hours invested

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gaming could have been employed in intense study, exercise or

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cultural events.

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who

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their

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to computer

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may lack

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socialisation skills which are fundamental in

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world.

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, the next generation will have

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limited communication ability

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a network of connections, which will turn

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detrimental

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economy. What is needed is for the government and parents to take action to solve

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problem. One measure that would improve the situation is if the parents committed to

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boundaries and limiting

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games

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hours.

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, they could incentive rewards whether they voluntarily minimise

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spent on computer

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would bring a

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reduction in playing.

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government

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should establish laws and regulations that enforce the previous

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and address it to the company maker, so that rigid rules can improve the harmful effects that

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practice could have on children.

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, unless some solutions are found,

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trend may not be reduced, causing dreadful effects on

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future.

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, I believe that the only way to improve the situation is for the government and family members to step in and intervene providing rewards for

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spent in diverse activities and

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limits.