The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram shows the 7 phases
in
which Change preposition
of
honey's
production Change noun form
honey
consits
.
Correct your spelling
consists
Firstly
, the bees leave the hive in order to search for green fields full of flowers. Once they find them, Linking Words
the next step is
taking the nectar, Linking Words
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that
is the raw material thanks to whom the Correct pronoun usage
which
honey's
process is possible. The nectar located at the Change noun form
honey
center
of the flower is removed by the bees that deposit it in cells within the hive. Change the spelling
centre
Then
, the little insects start Linking Words
Add the particle
to flap
flap
their wings to produce air. Wrong verb form
flapping
This
action allows the water to evaporate. Linking Words
After
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this
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last
passage, honey is ready to be collected and canned!Linking Words
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