Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,one of the most
contoversial
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controversial
issue
around the world is education.Meanwhile,some people believe some Change to a plural noun
issues
extracurriculum
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extracurriculars
such
as working for charity
or teaching Add an article
a charity
to
other Change preposition
apply
children
should be mandatory among the
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apply
children
.I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this
statement.Because in my opinion there are some merits and demerits of both
views.In this
essay,I will discuss both
views with some relevant examples.
It is well-established fact that,
education is Remove the comma
apply
process
of learning in different aspects.Add an article
the process
a process
School
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The school
first
of all, has striking similarities to Add the comma(s)
,first
the
society.Correct article usage
apply
children
in school learn not only some academic courses but also
some non-academic courses.Some extra activities such
as working for charity
,Add an article
a charity
the charity
improve
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improving
neighbourhood
or teaching other Correct article usage
the neighbourhood
children
in sport
or Fix the agreement mistake
sports
lesson
can boost Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
up
Change preposition
apply
children
relationships and communication abilities.They can learn Change noun form
children's
also
social skills to interact with wide
variety of people Add an article
a wide
as well as
increasing
the helping nature Wrong verb form
increase
in
students.Change preposition
of
In addition
,they can gain specific knowledge that can be useful for their future careers.
On the other hand
,there are some disadvantages if unpaid jobs become compulsory,Firstly
,the main goal of going to the
school for Correct article usage
apply
childrens
is Correct your spelling
children
learning
numerous subjects Change the verb form
to learn
for instance
,math,biology,science or geography and if they have to do more extra activities they may have not enough time to concentrate on their necessary subject.Besides
, extra jobs can lead to distraction for them.For
example
some naughty Add a comma
,example
childrens
may not pay attention to their main courses.
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children
To sum up
,childrens
should learn enormous capabilities during their childhood because with Correct your spelling
children
both
academic and non-academic Add an article
a both
the both
lesson
they gain lif-coping skills and just with the cooperation of Fix the agreement mistake
lessons
both
we can gain the desired result.Submitted by marzieh.kiani on
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