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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipement that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter . Describe the problem with the equipement . explain how this problem affecting to your work. .say what you want the shop or company to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am
writting
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writing
 to you to complain about the external hard disk which I
purchaged
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purchased
 from your shop
last
 week on Monday.The
files
 are not opening
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 the hard disk. I had a visit to your shop
last
 Monday on 27th
feb.
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I bought
a
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 external hard disk100- Gega Bite which reference no is Ro321989.It
was functioned
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functioned
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 very well and I uploaded very
impotant
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important
files
in
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 it. On Thursday I connected to my Laptop.The uploaded
files
 did not open. I work for a company as HR Manager.I could not
able
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 hold any
meeting
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due to
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the unavailablity
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unavailablity
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unavailability
availability
of my meeting
schedual
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schedule
 and other
files
 as the hard disk did not open.It is affecting my total
perfermances
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performances
performance
. The hard desk is under warranty period.I visited your
custumer
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customer
 care desk on
the Thursday
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Thursday
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.The person who was attending
me
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to me
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,
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told
that
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me that
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 it will take
threedays
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three days
 to fix it up.I explained
him
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about
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my situation,but I could not get any satisfactory outcome.I trust that your company is a branded one and have good service.But I am unhappy with the process. I would
apreciate
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appreciate
if
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 you could take it
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serious
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 and fix it
as
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immediate
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 effect. I look forward to seeing the satisfactory
effeorts
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efforts
. yours faithfully Ranjit
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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