The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.
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map depicts how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.It clear from the maps that are the coastal town has changs into modern
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a modern
city
.
According to
what is shown on the first map we can see portland in 1950 Grassland covered the most area and just has three buildings in the northwest.on the second map we can see how the city
changes
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changed
the
urban area in 2007 they build Apartments opposite the sea and around the marina port has new parking next to the Swimming pool and in a down area divided to 4 places for businesses they build two Shops and Cinema and Houses.
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To sum up
,we could say that Portland in 1950 is quite a place and simple to living
in.Change the form of the verb
live
While
in 2007 city
developed into modern
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a modern
city
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