In many countries, men and women are working full time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
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her
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responsibilites
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responsibilities
Thus
there is an extreme need to enlighten the importance of sharing domestic tasks among couples.
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which can only be provided through
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and
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and supporting
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Thus
, it will reduces
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on
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for
women
and may utlimatley
strengthen the relationship of the couple.
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ultimately
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women
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women
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For example
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in domestic work.
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women
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