Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam, I saw the advertisement

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your restaurant and writing to apply for the job you mentioned. I am working in the Sushi bar "Misaki" as a top chef in Tokyo, Japan. Having ten years of experience as a sushi chef, I am sure that I can help your bar right away.

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my main field is sushi, I am

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good at cooking other Japanese food,

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as oden and katsu.

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, I have an experience as a hole manager for 5 years.

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means that I

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can work as a whole staff.

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I am sure that I'm the best person for the position. Since I'm planning to move to the UK

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week, I can attend an interview all day next week. Please let me know a suitable date for my interview. I'm looking forward to working in your restaurant soon. Faithfully yours, Ayaka Hioki

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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156 words

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Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In many countries, people are consuming more sugar-based drinks that ever before. Why is this happening? What chould be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?

Many students choose to complete at least some part of their university studies in a foreign country. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad

In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case ? do you think this is a positive or negative developement?

Some people believe that it’s acceptable for the media to publish the details of famous people’s private lives.Others say that it should be stopped.