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Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing •describe your suitability for this area of work •say when you can attend an interview

#restaurant #job #•explain #•describe #suitability #area #work #•say #interview
Dear Sir or Madam, I saw the advertisement
about
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 your restaurant and writing to apply for the job you mentioned. I am working in the Sushi bar "Misaki" as a top chef in Tokyo, Japan. Having ten years of experience as a sushi chef, I am sure that I can help your bar right away.
Although
 my main field is sushi, I am
also
 good at cooking other Japanese food,
such
 as oden and katsu.
Moreover
, I have an experience as a hole manager for 5 years.
This
 means that I
also
 can work as a whole staff.
Therefore
 I am sure that I'm the best person for the position. Since I'm planning to move to the UK
at the end
 of
this
 week, I can attend an interview all day next week. Please let me know a suitable date for my interview. I'm looking forward to working in your restaurant soon. Faithfully yours, Ayaka Hioki
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