The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates how much period usually tourists of four different nationalities spent their spare time
while
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on vacation in Greece in the
last
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month of the summer in 2019. The vertical axis shows the amount of time,
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the horizontal one represents ethics. Bars are divided into three distinctive activities.
Overall
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, the Asian people of China dedicate more to reading,
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Brazilians pay attention to the beach. To embark on, both Turkish and Americans appreciate visiting sights of all nationalities. The least popular pastime is viewing the landscapes,
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, the remaining leisure time-spending divides the leader's position with a little advantage of reading because of Chinese influence. In conclusion, reading hit approximately eight hours on the peak and relatively high position which fluctuates between 4 and 5 hours per day.
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, spare time spent on entertainment on the beach constantly increases to 1 hour from Chinese with initial parameters of nearly 3 to American and Turkish with 4 and 5 respectively and
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, ends up with Brazilians who are able to spend about a quarter of the whole day.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
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