Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towads international tourism?

Museums, libraries and historical places
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to the government, especially for the
people
who live there. One of the negative
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of the international tourism International tourism has been popular for many years. To get acquainted with the culture and the country,
people
often fly to different countries.
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the government controls the security of the country, residents are still most worried.
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the future immigration and overpopulation of different
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from countries will contribute to a decrease in jobs and so on. International tourism is an integral part of every country and its popularization will always be useful for the development of infrastructure and economy. Many
people
disagree and think that there are many negative consequences, so it is worth considering 
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural erosion
  • economic vulnerability
  • infrastructure strain
  • sustainable tourism
  • conservation efforts
  • global market fluctuations
  • heritage preservation
  • community involvement
  • educational programs
  • diversified economy
  • ecotourism
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