The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
This
diagram demonstrates the rate of men
and women
of various ages
and the average of physical exercises in Australia in 2010.
As seen in the chart women
who are between 45 and 54 ages
have the highest rate of doing sports with a percentage
of 53.3 whereas
the highest exercising age of men
is 15-24 and this
percentage
is 52.8. Moreover
, men
’s percentage
39.5 have the lowest physical activity from 35 to 44 ages
. In addition
, the rate of women
is 47.1 that are 65 and overages.
Between 25 to 34 age participants who account for a female proportion of 48.9 are higher than males whose proportion is 42.2. 39.5% of men
and 52.5% of women
exercise regularly in the range of 35 to 44 years old . Similarly
, we almost observe equal percentages between 45-54 ages
and 55-64 ages
. Relatively, while
the 45-54 ages
of men
group are 43.1 , women
are 53.3 besides
45-54 ages
of men
group are 45.1 and women
are 53.
Compare with women
's and men
's participation over 65 ages
, women
's participation are percentage
47.1 a little bit higher than men
's participation percentage
of 46.7. These ages
of men
increase regular exercise by 2%, on the other hand
, these ages
of women
decrease exercise by 0.3%.Submitted by alvianciubotaru on
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