The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
This
diagram demonstrates the rate of Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
of various Use synonyms
ages
and the average of physical exercises in Australia in 2010.
As seen in the chart Use synonyms
women
who are between 45 and 54 Use synonyms
ages
have the highest rate of doing sports with a Use synonyms
percentage
of 53.3 Use synonyms
whereas
the highest exercising age of Linking Words
men
is 15-24 and Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
percentage
is 52.8. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
men
’s Use synonyms
percentage
39.5 have the lowest physical activity from 35 to 44 Use synonyms
ages
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the rate of Linking Words
women
is 47.1 that are 65 and overages.
Between 25 to 34 age participants who account for a female proportion of 48.9 are higher than males whose proportion is 42.2. 39.5% of Use synonyms
men
and 52.5% of Use synonyms
women
exercise regularly in the range of 35 to 44 years old . Use synonyms
Similarly
, we almost observe equal percentages between 45-54 Linking Words
ages
and 55-64 Use synonyms
ages
. Relatively, Use synonyms
while
the 45-54 Linking Words
ages
of Use synonyms
men
group are 43.1 , Use synonyms
women
are 53.3 Use synonyms
besides
45-54 Linking Words
ages
of Use synonyms
men
group are 45.1 and Use synonyms
women
are 53.
Compare with Use synonyms
women
's and Use synonyms
men
's participation over 65 Use synonyms
ages
, Use synonyms
women
's participation are Use synonyms
percentage
47.1 a little bit higher than Use synonyms
men
's participation Use synonyms
percentage
of 46.7. These Use synonyms
ages
of Use synonyms
men
increase regular exercise by 2%, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, these Linking Words
ages
of Use synonyms
women
decrease exercise by 0.3%.Use synonyms
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