Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

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Would it matter if your personal surrounding were organised/tidy? The
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to that question will differ from one mindset to another. Not all of us like to keep our stuff in its supposed
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, but others might see that
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. The two points will be discussed
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down the line with more in-depth details. Does a tidy
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really make any difference? Yes, that’s my simple
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. Having a
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place
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help
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us find what we need instantly, as it is in its spot. A key in the fob or a remote on the
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left side,
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that
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certain
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will never be lost. Assigning a
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for each of your stuff is important, it simply means that whenever you are done with that thing you just return it
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the designated spot. What does a messy well unorganised
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offer? That’s a hard question to
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, but I will still happily
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it. Having a
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messy workplace/home might give us the opportunity to
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things
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accidently
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accidentally
. A scientist in the 20th century once was doing long research on
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. The scientist had the most atrocious unorganised lab ever, he had his papers and experiments all over the
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. It was so messy that there was trash everywhere. One day he walked
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his lab to get some of his papers. He had a bag in his hand at the
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. He placed the bag on the table and the papers on the table fell on the ground, when he reached for
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paper
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a quick look at it, he realised that the
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was in front of his eyes
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whole
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! After all, everyone has their own preference, but from my point of view, having a messy
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wins all day every day. A messy
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means that you don’t have to put the effort of returning
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in
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its
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place
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, that’s just a waste of
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. A non-organised
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might mean you will look for your
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from
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to
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, but that makes you find other
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you might have lost at some point
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your miserable life. A
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like
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what I want around me, it’s the environment I want to be in. but it is up to everyone
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at
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the end, as long as you’re happy. No one really cares
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the end.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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