Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?

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are frequently challenged by innovation
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since most of them are considered
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outdated perspectives. Despite the fact that
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could play an essential role
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reminding
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of their roots, I strongly agree that some
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should be put behind to make progress
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the future.
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, nowadays, should take the role to introduce to the next generation the life of their ancestors,
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should learn it with critical thinking, knowing not all of them are worth to be inherited.
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are valued by most
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since it contains the wisdom from ancestors to
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their descendants, which has strong influences on local
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, strictly following
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could restrict the development of a society, since innovation could go against the principles of
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, the development of astronomical science makes
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doubt the existence of gods,
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it, the activities and events
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for pleasing gods to prevent natural disasters.
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, nowadays, are more symbolic than have practical influence
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the majority of
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kept the traditional ceremonies as a reminder of their ancestors
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, some minor ethnic groups in Taiwan keep the tradition of throwing a celebration for harvest seasons despite that not many of them are farming.
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, it is inevitable that
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are crucial for maintaining
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between
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, those
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should not cause restrictions for the world making progress. In my perspective,
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should take the place
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a reminder of the past with no practical influence on modern
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • heritage
  • continuity
  • progress
  • innovative
  • cultures
  • societal advances
  • integration
  • cultural tapestry
  • ideologies
  • reconciled
  • evolved
  • adapted
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