e diagram below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the main information and make comparison where relevant.

e diagram provides information about the process of frozen fish pies.

Overall

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, it can be seen, there have 20

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in the picture. To being with, the first picture shows us the delivery of

potatoes

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by truck for more than one month. Second, the line gives

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of how to prepare

potatoes

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in seven

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namely clean, peel, slice, boil, chill, store and warp in the bag.

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, in other ,lines it can be seen that

salmon

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and

potatoes

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come in two different ways.

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,

salmon

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only take 12 months or less for delivery.

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, there have seven

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similar to

potatoes

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first step is called lemon juice and

then

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put salt into the

salmon

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.

The next step is

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to steam the

salmon

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in the oven after that check the skin and bones

by

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of

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the inspector and prepare peas and sauce.

However

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, both

product

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go

to

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through

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the same line process for freeze and

prepare

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for sale in the store.