Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter:  Describe the problem and why you are unhappy  Arrange for an engineer to visit your home  Request a reduction in your bill

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Dear Mr Kevin, I am writing to bring your attention to the issue I

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facing with the internet speed of your service provider for the

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15 days.

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, I sent an email to your technician to repair the speed problem

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week. He tried to fix it but was not successful. I am a remote employer of an organization, I

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need high speed in order to complete the company's tasks. But, unfortunately, I am really frustrated about your service.

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, I would like you to send a professional engineer to solve

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complication. What I understood from your technician is that the trouble is not only in the dish frequency but

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in the receiver. Let your engineer call me to guide him to my house location.

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, As you now know

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issue

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going on for 15 days, I would like to request to send the bill deducting these days from the month only after fixing the problem. Because I am using alternative sources on the internet in order to continue my work. waiting for your kind response. Yours sincerely, Mandeep Singh

Submitted by mandeepsinghsony2022 on Tue Mar 07 2023

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task response

The letter effectively describes the problem faced with the internet service provider and requests for an engineer visit and reduction in the bill. However, it needs to include more specific details about the internet speed issue and the previous correspondence with the service provider.

coherence and cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is clear, and the greeting and closing are appropriate. However, it would benefit from organizing the content into more distinct paragraphs to enhance cohesion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

188 words

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Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In the letter:  Describe the problem and why you are unhappy  Arrange for an engineer to visit your home  Request a reduction in your bill

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

write a letter to your manager ask for some time off to complete a qualification

Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their chuldren’s Study. On the contrary , those online games have produced a lot of negative effect on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is society has to care for more and more elderly people.

Topic: robots and artificial are being developed to replace humans in the work place. Why this is happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?