The best way to solve the traffic congestion in the city is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and

achitecture

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architecture

architectural

put all intention to solve traffic

jam

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throught

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through

throughout

the city.

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,it seems not to

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completed with the problem.

Although

,

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governments encourage the using

transport

,

instead

using

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private car, systematic errors always happen

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our daily life. I disagree

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solution which providing free public

transport

in

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any

time

would be not

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alternative. There are mainly two reasons

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why it couldn't succeed.

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of one,

expense

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of

maintaing

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maintaining

the system of

transport

has consumed with enormously. There need more

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employees, supplements,and electricity.if there are no people using the

transport

at night ,costs waste inevitably.

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it's not a problem of the

time

making

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utilize

at night.

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,

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for finishing work and back

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home is

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crowded and cars are trapped

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the road. It might be

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number

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of

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limiting

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access.

On the other hand

, some cities where are mobility to commute highly even in

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night need a

transport

running in all day .

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efficiently is

nessearily

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necessarily

to commute . Most

commuter

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don't want to

consum

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consume

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time

on the road.