People born in rural areas move to big cities when they become adult. What are the reasons for this? Is this positive trend or negative trend?
Nowadays, numerous countries face massive urbanization trends, in view of
people
from Use synonyms
countryside
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the countryside
move
to Wrong verb form
moving
metropolis
when they become Correct article usage
a metropolis
adult
. Fix the agreement mistake
adults
Then
, in the following paragraphs, Linking Words
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essay shall elucidate a reason behind Linking Words
this
issue like looking for better jobs. Linking Words
Additionally
, the author believes that the earlier phenomenon has detrimental effects.
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To begin
with, there are many opportunities which are offered in Linking Words
the
urban areas. Correct article usage
apply
Consequently
, some rural societies will think that they should Linking Words
to
immigrate Change the verb form
apply
into
numerous cities in order to gain preferable jobs, particularly because several industry zones may offer higher Change preposition
to
salary
which will be a motivation. Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
For example
, the capital of Indonesia which is Jakarta faces Linking Words
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occasion all Linking Words
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time in view of Linking Words
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city Linking Words
has
a plethora of corporations which will pay workers massive Wrong verb form
having
salary
.
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salaries
Nevertheless
, social issues Linking Words
such
as slum Linking Words
area
and poverty will be negative sides Fix the agreement mistake
areas
from
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of
the
urbanization. One reason Correct article usage
apply
such
as Linking Words
majority
of rural Add an article
the majority
people
do not have adequate skills to compete can explain earlier communal problems. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
people
who never get opportunities will construct slum Use synonyms
settlement
in order to survive, Fix the agreement mistake
settlements
although
, they live under Linking Words
poverty
line. For Add an article
the poverty
well-known
example, Correct article usage
a well-known
in
the bank of some rivers in Jakarta, there are a number of families Change preposition
on
suffer
in unhealthy places because they were Wrong verb form
suffering
immigrant
who did not acquire better lives.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
immigrants
this
literature stands on Linking Words
a
position that Correct article usage
the
people
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move
into big cities can Wrong verb form
moving
be explain
by an explanation that they need to get better jobs. Change the verb form
be explained
Nevertheless
, the highest ratio of them Linking Words
do
not have enough qualifications which will create several problems later like escalating Change the verb form
does
number
of slum areas and poverty.Correct article usage
the number
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