People born in rural areas move to big cities when they become adult. What are the reasons for this? Is this positive trend or negative trend?

Nowadays, numerous countries face massive urbanization trends, in view of

people

from

countryside

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the countryside

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move

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moving

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to

metropolis

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a metropolis

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when they become

adult

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adults

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.

Then

, in the following paragraphs,

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essay shall elucidate a reason behind

this

issue like looking for better jobs.

Additionally

, the author believes that the earlier phenomenon has detrimental effects.

To begin

with, there are many opportunities which are offered in

the

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urban areas.

Consequently

, some rural societies will think that they should

to

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immigrate

into

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numerous cities in order to gain preferable jobs, particularly because several industry zones may offer higher

salary

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salaries

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which will be a motivation.

For example

, the capital of Indonesia which is Jakarta faces

this

occasion all

this

time in view of

this

city

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a plethora of corporations which will pay workers massive

salary

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salaries

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.

Nevertheless

, social issues

such

as slum

area

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areas

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and poverty will be negative sides

from

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the

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urbanization. One reason

such

as

majority

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the majority

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of rural

people

do not have adequate skills to compete can explain earlier communal problems.

Finally

,

people

who never get opportunities will construct slum

settlement

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settlements

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in order to survive,

although

, they live under

poverty

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the poverty

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line. For

well-known

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example,

in

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the bank of some rivers in Jakarta, there are a number of families

suffer

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in unhealthy places because they were

immigrant

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immigrants

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who did not acquire better lives. In conclusion,

this

literature stands on

a

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position that

people

move

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into big cities can

be explain

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by an explanation that they need to get better jobs.

Nevertheless

, the highest ratio of them

do

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not have enough qualifications which will create several problems later like escalating

number

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the number

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of slum areas and poverty.