The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates how utilized six types of renewable energy in the year 1980 and
expected
usage in the year 2030 in the USA. As per the 2008 report. Measure by Quadrillion units.
Correct article usage
the expected
Overall
, the consumption rate
of petrol, coal and natural gas
showed few fluctuations at the beginning of the period
and then
a significant rise over the period
, while
the nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower remained almost steady and will be maintained until 2030.
In 1980 petrol and oil, coal and natural gas
usage were nearly 35, 20 and 17 Quadrillion units respectively. Petrol and oil and coal rates were
increased gradually throughout the Unnecessary verb
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period
and it will be made about 50 and 30 Qu
as the highest consumer of energy in the USA. In addition
, coal experienced a sharp surge during 1990-1995 and it was 18 to 25 Qu
respectively. Both natural gas
and coal rates were almost similar until 2015 and then
coal exceeded the
natural Correct article usage
apply
gas
in 2015 by 22Qu. However
, natural gas
maintains a constant rate
until projection.
In early 1980 the consuming
Replace the word
consumption
rate
of nuclear, solar and hydropower was around 4 Qu
and fluctuating
throughout the entire Wrong verb form
fluctuated
period
, but not exceeding 10 Qu
over the given time period
. The expected rate
of those energy types is 6, 5 and 4 respectively in 2030.Submitted by ranasinghenadeeshani07 on
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