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more men dying of covid-19 than women percentage of deaths by gender due to the covid -19 disease

#men #covid-19 #women #percentage #deaths #gender #covid #disease
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Covid-19
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 diseases attack both sexes and the majority of people dying because of it is
men
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 rather than
women
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 in several countries.
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,
men
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 in Italy and Denmark are far higher dying
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than
women
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due to
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Covid-19
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 diseases,
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 Danish
women
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 are the least ones dying compared to other countries in Europe and Asia.
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half of
men
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 in France experienced death, Italian and Danish
men
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 remain the highest dying among other countries because of
Covid-19
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 infection, accounting for 71%.
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women
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 in France dying have nearly the same huge percentage as the Iranian
women
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, taking up well under fifty.
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, both
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 and
women
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 citizens in China have dying cases similar trend data with Portugal at 64% and 36% respectively.
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, the number of
women
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 in Italy and Denmark have the same dying cases at around 29%.
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 happening to
women
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 in Spain and Germany where they get
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 symptoms until they die
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 approximately 35%.
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