The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among UK residents in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories

among UK residents in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the graph below compares the expenditure on
food
,
drink
,restaurants , hotel and entertainment of these types among UK residents in 2004.
people
under 30 spent 6 %of their income on
food
and
drink
,and it was the lowest among all age groups .the figure increased steadily , until over 75 ages
people
,they spend 23% on
food
and
drink
,which was the highest among all age groups. the spending on entertainment most showed the same trend. young
people
under 30 only spend 6%,and for
people
from 46 to 60 increased to 13% ,and
then
people
from 60-75 spend the highest percentage (23%),but the figure was fallen to 13% for
people
over 75.
people
under 30 spend the most on restaurants and hotels up to 14%,and for the ages 30-45,45-60and over 75,all figures showed almost the same about 13%,and
people
over 75 spend the smallest percentage in
this
category.(6%)
overall
.the oldest
people
over 75 old spend more on
food
and
drink
,but the young
people
under 30 spend almost money on restaurants and hotels.
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